Sujet : Altaïr from Caelus | |  Posté le 05-02-2004 à 01:16:11
| Let me tell you a little story about a great defender of Justice, Knight Altaïr, servant of Angels, but not enslaved, the Door of Justice Keeper and also the hero everyone knows.
I'm only a Knight, searching for clues, fighting for life
Consuming Nights, my spirit is almost yours, spiky as Diamond Knife
I'm only a Warrior, Star Guardian, sailing to the deep ocean
Of freedom and courage, tough as mountains, on clouds I always lean
This is only a little part of Altaïr's symphony, composed by constellations musicians, for the one who spent his life fighting and praying for us... When he was sleeping, night was leaving, bringing sun and harmony on Earth, on us, fragile and so narrow-minded people that we are and stay to be, despite of all our fathers lessons...
When night was falling with its brightly lights, that we know as big galaxians, comets or more accurately, nice stars, he always was there, standind in front of our worst nightmares, a chain of honor in his left hand, an aurora blockshield in his right one... He hadn't any wing, like his masters, the venered Archangels, but he was as quick as wind, as silencious as breathes, as invisible as our forces, that we don't let go out, due to our weaknesses... When he was trying to find his path through our sky, through the storms and across our dreams, he always thought to bring light of hope with him....
Without him, we only would be dust, smashed by hell corrupted malefic forces, coming into the obscurity of the night to take us away from our hopes, our dreams, our lives... We never met him, but he knew all of us, all about us, every time, everywhere, that's why he deserves that I let here a little word for him, for you too... Immortels, stay proud in darkness, keep your lines and never give up !! One day, we'll all together find his way, the way of Altaïr, our protector, our guide..... Could I be heard from him, and long life to us, friends !!
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| | Posté le 05-02-2004 à 12:11:38
| ^ms arete decrire en anglais c chiant jcomprend rien tu pe pa faire une traduction en francais apre mm si sa gache un pe ke les otre comprene un pe ske tu dit che pa^^
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| | Posté le 05-02-2004 à 12:56:10
| tjrs en train de raler toi ^^
moie je pige pas mais fait comme moi, fait semblant !!
@aquila, super ton texte ^^
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| | Posté le 05-02-2004 à 19:02:03
| jpe pa m'empecher et en+ ta kk1 pr le prouver ikky 
jpe pa faire semblant jpe pa dire si c nul si c bien etc...
juste une ptite traduction comme mm un resumer en gros c dur??
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| | Posté le 05-02-2004 à 21:36:42
| quand j'aurai envie, a translation.. mé pas ce soir, non ^^
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| | Posté le 06-02-2004 à 09:52:45
| mets y du tien aussi Aquila ^^
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| | Posté le 06-02-2004 à 16:25:24
| Oh Putain...
en general je regarde jamais cette partie du forum , mais la , jt sur de trouver un truc excellent ^^
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| | Posté le 06-02-2004 à 18:18:49
| c'est tres bien contruit bvo.
les phrases ont une tres bonne tournure, et le resultat est tres convaincant.
la prochaine fois, tu tournes ca en poeme 
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| | Posté le 06-02-2004 à 19:03:30
| ET EN FRANCAIS ^^
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| | Posté le 06-02-2004 à 19:05:22
| wollen Sie in deutsch nächste Zeit ? lol
stop laughing lol
bref.. une traduction est possible, avec qqes remaniements..
sinon, merci all ^^
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